Your Angel

by Savannah Kate   Jun 30, 2008


God, I wanna thank you,
For this miracle you gave to me
Never thought id end up with him
don't deserve, why cant he see

How much time did You take
With this angel than the rest
To make his heart so beautiful
Why'd you choose ME to be so blessed?

But its him i wake up for
Stay up so late thinking about
Trying to find a way to show him...
Its him i cant live without

Could it be I see You in him,
Look into those gorgeous blue eyes
You can see straight to his heart
In him my life relies

Hes so much more that he thinks,
To me, perfect in every way
God, why is is so hard for him
To believe me when I say...

That its him i wake up for
Stay up so late thinking about
Trying to find a way to show him
Its him i cant live without

God, its him i wake up for
Stay up so late thinking about
Please, why cant You show YOUR ANGEL,
Its him i cant live without.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    This is a beautiful poem, and thank you for the comment on mine, I loved the reference to angels =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a very beautiful poem. I really love two lines in your poem.

    For this miracle you gave to me
    - Miracle = To be with your angel (Nice line)

    To make his heart so beautiful
    - Great description! beautiful it is.

    The meaning of the poem was very good, I think to improve this you should work on the flow of it. Some lines line like:

    Never thought id end up with him
    don't deserve, why cant he see
    - It doesn't flow well for me.

    Anyway another suggestion I would like to give is.. I think to improve the poem more you should add more 'deep/strong' words in it. It will be more interesting to read it.

    Anyway, I was really touched in this poem. I too believe in angels! Keep up the good work.

    Thanks for reading my poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Haha thank you very much!

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