Stupid Cupid

by rebeccasarah   Jun 30, 2008


Stupid cupid, what did you do?
Stupid cupid, you pierced me through.
Stupid cupid, your arrow's in my heart,
and now without him I fall apart.

Stupid cupid, where'd you go?
Stupid cupid don't you know?
Stupid cupid, you missed your shot,
cause now my heart is in a knot.

Stupid cupid, can't you see?
Stupid cupid, why can't he love me?
Stupid cupid, I have one more thing to say..
Please, oh please, uncupid me today.

~So its not the best.. but comment and vote anyways please! I need suggestions, so feel free to leave your honest opinion. Thanks. :)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    This is the best. i can totally relate!!! heartfelt and beautiful. keep it up. ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Very cute and heartfelt at the same time :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    That was awesome! you dont need to change nothing. it was perfect. it rhymed so good and it was like you had so much anger. loved the poem. keep writing, you got talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jessy

    Thanks For Commenting On My Poem:D

    All I Can Say For This Poem Is AMAZING! Its Brilliant:) Dont Stop Writing:D

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