Simply breath taking.

Wow babe. This.. is uber powerful.
wonderful use of imagery...its utterly breathtaking... and, im really speechless.
Its amazing, as you are babe.
She'll come back...
*huggles*

Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
very very very good!!!!!!!!! love the language and the imagery!!!
a devastating ending, brilliant writing
5/5
aish
xx

This poem was absolutely amazing. I loved it, and honestly, there's nothing I would have improved. Thank you for sharing.

I dont even know what to say
this poem is great
5/5

"exhaustion laces through her sweet fingers"

Amazing.