You're a record on repeat

by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden   Jul 1, 2008


Everytime i see your face
i travel into space
your a record on repeat
and everytime you smile i am in defeat
you make me crazy
and i am never lazy round you
but baby i cant get enough of your love
cause your a record on repeat.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    First off, your title.. It's supposed to be You're instead of your.
    Secondly, If I were you.. I'd captiolize your i's in your poem.. just because =)
    Thirdly, there were some words that needed apostrophes like I noticed can't didn't have one.
    annnd lastly, =] amazing write.. very beautiful!!!!
    5/5 niceeee job

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Awww i really liked this it was simple and sweet. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Awwww so sweet lesthat.5/5
    **harlea

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