This is so beautifully written! Your words were so powerful and really touched me. You wrote this so well, I really enjoyed what you wrote.

"Why does she cry everynight before she goes to bed?"

"everynight"- should be a space between it.

But I really liked this whole poem, keep writing! :)

* Sometimes God Pushes Us To Our Limits...He Tests Us Beyond Our Endurance, Because He Has Greater Faith In Us Than We Have In Ourselves! B POSOTIVE ... good poem !