Its so beautiful... hope i can write in this way...u r really a good writer...

This is really true,no one can reach perfection but even though everyone keeps trying to catch it so we live in a great conflict that sometimes leads us to confusion between the life we live and the one we want to live...
Good job,plz keep it up...U really got a talent:)..

Speaks the reality of life... there is no such thing as perfect... and we have to live with it... Great poem... keep it up.

Well uv done it again! a very true poem and with such a great point and writen so well. excellentay

Wow,, that is a very nice poem actually.
People are trying to create a perfection but I don't think they know what they really want to create, like to the point where we don't take a step back and look with appreciation at everything we have and yet we still want more. It's the after greed when you have everything in front of you.