Wow this was beauitfully written. very pure heartfelt poem. i loved it all!

oh if sorrow was snow
that cold melt by the morning
when i close my eyes,
even i could finally,
rest in peace.

i like that stanza the most. i loved how you compared sorrow to snow, quite creative. all and all this was a very expressive piece of work. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.