"if you leave me now I might just die."
just might die sounds better to me
um good poem but some pointers
1~ Don't use the word and so much. Don't repeat the same words or it blows the writing in question the wrong way. Expand your vocabulary and make you poems spicy and strong. don't let them be weak. I will break them if they are.
2~ Don't let you line length vary so much. It is much easier to read if the lines are reasonably paired. in this particular case, you started short and ended really long.
3~ This is supposed to be sad. So I should want to cry at the end. I didn't even think about it. Make me want to cry. Let me see the part about your heart getting hurt. Make it seem real
I did love your pice. I hope that my advice wasn't harsh and that it helps.

Lexie

I like this poem a lot, it really describes how it feels to have some1 leave you.

good job

Omigosh i felt that exact way when my bf dumped me a couple months ago. great emotion and word flow.

This poem makes me cry ... :(.. heyy my girlfriend is leaving me just like your poem . I can feel it how does it hurt if someone leaves

This is really good, I really enjoyed it.
I love the way you write, dont ever stop!

Good job... Sad poem. I know how you feel.