Comments : Goodbye love

  • 16 years ago

    by The Tay

    Beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow julia. this was very strong, beginning to end. I liked the flow and vocabulary, very sweet. i also got to imagine a few different scenes in my head, which was a fun thing to do for a poem.

    also....it takes two to break a relationship, not just one. so don't beat yourself up.