She

by LadzOfSoul   Jul 1, 2008


She's waiting him in vain
Having a masquerade that time wasn't changed
Of all the lies he said
She can't find a tranquil to release this pain

The tears flow, her heart broke...
Lies depict as he spoke
Intense feeling is trying to explode
Fallen angel, swept away by fears
She bleeds for every word he speaks

Down on her knees, I can see the pain
On how his love died down, like a fire lose its flame
And how this pain clinch on her like a ball of chain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Excellent poem once again! Flow was great and the emotions conveyed seemed so real.
    I enjoyed the way that you talk in third person - it changes the whole feel of the poem! 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked few lines of this poem. But as a whole I think you can make it better. Keep writing...

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