Its a powerful poem loves, its filled with alot of pain and i felt that. things like this happen and this is what we do not like to see. but the pain people throw at us we do not know how to deal with

Wow...i agree with Julia it is a very powerful and really good poem. I feel in every word all the hurt and sadness. Its terrible how people think they can just lay all there shit on us and expect us to be able to handle it.

amazing job...keep it up 5/5