How she save my life

by Mister 47   Jul 1, 2008


I lye on the ground, dreaming of a black place
i feel trapped , can not move a finger
and a sudden light come from behind , i see her face
her voice singing like a beautiful singer

i look at my tears on the ground falling ,
i look at her standing before me
and she raise her hand and my name calling
her smile blind me , i could not see

suddenly , i wake on the beach
she is holding my hand ,
and her tears wash my face
and drop off to wet the surrounding sands

i open my eyes, and a cry of happiness start
and holding my body so tight i can not breath
she hold me like i am falling apart
like she found in my heart a treasure beneath

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    You've described a pretty image of love. a gripping poem. i love it for the intensity of it! good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by nena

    I really loved it def touched by it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    I Like It Alot....Thats Like What Happend To Me A Few Weeks Ago I Was Lost And Torn Now I Found A Girl And Im Happyer And IDK She Lit My World And This Fire In Me =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Beautiful x

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is a beautiful image...You are are lie on the ground and thinking dark thoughts... Then suddenly...an angel (or a short of angel ;) appears. Carrying light (read Noor ;) with her inside... to light up your world. To save you...

    And you become blind by her beauty... Well, she must be charming then!

    And you wake up from beach...and she is there... Mmmm

    I think love is like a miracle. It can change your world totally..like in this poem... Empty life...become totally so colourful.

    Nice writing. :)

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