This poem is a beautiful image...You are are lie on the ground and thinking dark thoughts... Then suddenly...an angel (or a short of angel ;) appears. Carrying light (read Noor ;) with her inside... to light up your world. To save you...

And you become blind by her beauty... Well, she must be charming then!

And you wake up from beach...and she is there... Mmmm

I think love is like a miracle. It can change your world totally..like in this poem... Empty life...become totally so colourful.

Nice writing. :)

Beautiful x

I Like It Alot....Thats Like What Happend To Me A Few Weeks Ago I Was Lost And Torn Now I Found A Girl And Im Happyer And IDK She Lit My World And This Fire In Me =)

I really loved it def touched by it 5/5

You've described a pretty image of love. a gripping poem. i love it for the intensity of it! good work!