Broken

by Chelsie Nicole   Jul 1, 2008


Who would've thought that you were just like all the rest? Who would've guessed? How did you fool me for so long? Why couldn't I see what you truly were?

I thought we had something. So i started falling for you and disappointment was all i found.

You turned me away and then I broke...I broke into so many pieces and was scattered all over!

I decided to go and find those pieces and with each one I found pain and misery, but now that I almost have all of the pieces I'm starting to come together again stronger and tougher. piece by piece, day by day, week by week. I loved you but why should I love someone who hurt me as bad as you did?

As I'm getting over you I try to start loving someone else but all I can see is you and me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a pure wirte. very true an deep. i loved the emotion. i must say i feel exactly the sme. you basically took the words right out of my mouth. im glad im not the only one who feels that way. it's a relief to know others share the same pain. best of luck! and job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dominique

    Man i like this one its like my sisuation lol but naw really it was good....ill give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dreamer

    This is a beautifully expressed poems i could feel your pain.... 5/5.... great job

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