This is a beautifully expressed poems i could feel your pain.... 5/5.... great job

Man i like this one its like my sisuation lol but naw really it was good....ill give it a 5/5

This was a pure wirte. very true an deep. i loved the emotion. i must say i feel exactly the sme. you basically took the words right out of my mouth. im glad im not the only one who feels that way. it's a relief to know others share the same pain. best of luck! and job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.