A Match Made In Blood

"Sign the contract of our love.
And this is a match made in blood. "
``Dang, these lines were worded oh-so-perfectly. Left me speechless.

"
Deep bites into skin,
Sensual touches.
Nails scratching.
This is our love in action."
``Wonderful word-choice.. Deep, sensual, scratching.. Gives the reader something to picture. Great imagery.

"But this is what I see is perfect.
A black wedding,
With blood dripping down."
``A black wedding, with blood dripping down.. <~~ Wow, that was a bit deep :)

"This is a match made in lovers blood.
And its perfect. "
``Perfect ending, worded perfectly. Amazing. However, you'd want a apostrophe in it's because you want to say.. "and it is perfect." I know you know that, just a slight observation!

`` Overall, wonderful write. Deep poem, but was well done. 5/5. Keep up the great work, dear. :)

Definitely something i don't see often. a dark poem yet at the same time a love. it's like every kind of poem mixed into one almost. creative, original and a 5/5

This is something very weird! Well... but it's a dark poem so it's ok. Interesting and captivating... Nice to read.

Beautiful.
I loved this.
So much love and passion, yet, dark.
Three things i really love.
Excellent.
5/5.

Sincerely, Sammie-Lee.