Comments : Don't You Wish?

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh, I love it Jenniferrrr. <3 It was just perfect. I caught myself saying yes to almost all of these. I especially loved the last two lines, they were perfect. It all kind of summed it all up for me.. Excellent rhyming as well and flow... Wonderful write, :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by maggie

    Cute little poem(: