We are friends though
I'd like a kiss so I may know
if love is something that I feel
or if these silly thoughts aren't real.
Just one kiss, one quick embrace
to see if you make my heart race.
And if it's love what would I do
but to stare right back and say I love you.
I've felt awfully close before,
but you're someone I adore.
You make me laugh and I get shy.
I must know if love is why.
You envelope me with your smile
and leave my heart in denial.
It can't be anything but a crush,
but then what is this fluttery rush?
I must know if it's true.
Am I in love with you?
"Just one kiss, one quick embrase"
-I'm pretty sure embrace is with a c and not a s.
Hm. This was a okay poem. I honestly was looking for more. It was short. It expressed your feelings quickly and to the point.. but I don't think you went into much detail. I think you could add a whole lot more. I didn't really like this one.. that much from the other poems you write. Use more descriptive words maybe.. I know you can do it, you just have to take the time and look them up. This didn't impress me that much.. Sorry. 4/5.