"Just one kiss, one quick embrase"
-I'm pretty sure embrace is with a c and not a s.

Hm. This was a okay poem. I honestly was looking for more. It was short. It expressed your feelings quickly and to the point.. but I don't think you went into much detail. I think you could add a whole lot more. I didn't really like this one.. that much from the other poems you write. Use more descriptive words maybe.. I know you can do it, you just have to take the time and look them up. This didn't impress me that much.. Sorry. 4/5.