Comments : Pain...

  • 16 years ago

    by Zak

    Great poem.. Real sad though.. Im sorry : (

  • 16 years ago

    by Fatal

    Awesome poem...lotz a heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnathan

    I thought we were just friends. LOL
    just kiddin. I have a thought maybe if u
    keep pouring the bad into your poems
    soon there'll be nothing but good to fill your
    heart.Well done. Always thinkin of you.

  • 16 years ago

    by thalia

    Awww..I love this poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    This is amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    True to that... love does cause pain...and it hurts even worse when they promise not to hurt you!!
    ever.... verry niice i loved this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Very well done :) 5/5 and yea, love DOES cause pain..it sucks and it hurts..but every once in awhile its worth it :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I can relate to this. i've been there before, and it hurts. and it's never easy. but we all move on eventually. your poem was very true and very pure. and great detail throughout the whole thing. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.