Your Lies...

This is one of my favorites. Very good and I liked how it flowed.

Very , very good. i liked it. You kept the flow and you explained yourseld good in the poem. Nice job! keep writing.
-Stephanie

Hehe well thnks...!!
but 4 the record...!! This was a long time ago
he did the same thing once and he broke up then he wanted to get back i said yes but know i was the one the broke up with him..!!

Funny when things never change
Even when you say they will
But while your off thinking about her
My life is standing still

^^^ I like this stanza but some how "funny" doesnt seem the word to start off a poem. It is very well written stanza just the funny threw me off. Loved the last line

You tell me that you love me
When I leave
You tell me I'm your only one
And I let myself believe

^^^ strange how a person can tell you they love you in your face and it be a complete lie. This stanza was very good even for it being so simple

I know that you are using me
But you'll never let me go
I know that you don't love me
I know I'm just for show

^^^ never let some one do that to you hun. You are so much better then that. Its understandable falling into the first time but letting it continue is letting it go to far.

I don't know if I can stand
To see you love another girl
You know that you broke my heart
You know that your my world

^^^ Its hard to see the person you really like with some one else. But sometimes you have to learn to let go, if he was able to use you when you really liked him. He will do it again, it just showed him you were easy to get to with it. There is someone out there for you that wont do that.

But while your standing by my side
I'll believe your lies forever
Cause everything seems so perfect
When we are together

^^^ Letting your self into a trap that will never end and only hurt you. Will cause more pain on you. You need to escape from it. Not stand around like the fool and get all the hurt from it all.