Night

by Brennan P   Jul 1, 2008


In this night I rely,on waiting for a reply
never knowing were you will show
or how this love will grow
walking in darkness
waiting in sadness
hoping for you to show your love tonight
before this fright waiting in yesternight
I would show know fear
waiting in true revere
I held your heart in darkness
but with this utter sadness
you shone through the night, like an angel shining bright
wiping away my sadness
tearing away my madness
all I know is all that I show
but that is why I have you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Yet again a beautiful write!!
    this one is defenately fit for a song.
    i loved it.
    very beautiful piece, you will make a great songwriter!

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Omg! That is wonderful! That is so sweet. You're a truly amazing writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Omg! That is wonderful! That is so sweet. You're a truly amazing writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Omg! That is wonderful! That is so sweet. You're a truly amazing writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    You shone through the night, like an angel shining bright
    wiping away my sadness
    tearing away my madness
    all I know is all that I show
    but that is why I have you

    that is my favorite part..

    amazing :D

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