Great poem, really expresses where u are in your life right now and i felt that i was u for that moment. some peoples perception of love is a selfish yet creative way to manipulate and control lives that aren't there own because they have no ways of controling themselves. its not your fault that people act the way they do, the only one u can change is you (yeah that rhymed and i didnt even think about it lol). but your experiences and your way of expressing it through peotry is one of the greatest gifts because now you know, so now u can avoid situations. or, in the event that you become close to another guy like this, you can deal with it in the best way you know how. with amazing poetry. great job. check out my stuff and comment sometime? i'd appreciate it.
Jescelle.