Comments : Come on, Make My Day

  • 16 years ago

    by jessenia

    Thats some mest up stuff... but its good tho true stuff there

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    I was looking for a little light hearted humor to "make my day" and I found it and more in this poem. Great job. Looking forward to checking out more of yours when I get home from work tonight.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I got good a screwin
    some folks would say.
    But,I'm glad you're gone, darlin
    you made my day!
    **

    haha this was a delightful poem, it's nice to read and smile. You have a gift . Thank you for sharing a laugh in rhyme and flow

  • 16 years ago

    by michelle

    Thats funny lol i love it

  • 14 years ago

    by kalelrobin

    Lol..i like it, n hey it's already a song . you should sing it.