hey ppl...the ending was supposed to be like the girl was dying and too weak to type it all write and couldn't finish yourselves. thnx a lot plz vote and comment

wow this was so sad but very well written. great poem

thanx every1!! i'll read your poems and throw in a comment or two..

That is the most amazing poem i have ever read on this site, I absolutly love it. I have to admit something to you...I used it to send to my friends in an email to say goodbye...I did it yesterday...It explains my life exactly as well and it makesme sad someone elses knows exactly what im going through...