With You

by Savannah Kate   Jul 1, 2008


With you life is a slow dance in the rain
Bigger smiles, eyes sparkling
Reality is like a dream
My life is what I want it to be, it isn't the same.

With you i can soar
Running through a field of golden flowers
Looking up at the clouds, silently wishing and dreaming
Its your love that i live for.

With you, were the only ones in the world
Kissing you slowly..
Chills everywhere...
Ill always be your girl

With you, everything is right
Stars shine brighter, shining just for us
Me and you forever, baby.
Please whenever I'm WITH YOU don't let go,
Just hold me tight...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Oshane

    Cute and lovely

  • 16 years ago

    by Cobrey

    The feelings are great and the emotions even better... i like this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The passions of young love are like no other. enjoy your mements during this time where your memories will be born and forever be played later in life like they just happened. nice poem. may your true emotions never be afraid to show themselves . peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Kurt

    I like your unique expression of emotion. Many writers dance around their feelings attempting to copy styles that are popular at the time. This however isn't cookie cutter at all. The emotion is quite evident and you do a splendid job of describing how you feel.

    -AOTD

  • 16 years ago

    by Brennan P

    I like the emotion in this poem you made it very well.

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