Aweswome poem 5/5! I like the title...
This poem sort of shows your personality :P
great job, keep up the amazing work!

Aweswome poem 5/5! I like the title...
This poem sort of shows your personality :P
great job, keep up the amazing work!

The ending is captivating!A great way to end this poem.The only thing is that I'd prefer it to be split to stanzas,because somewhere in there I lose the flow.It would point out better what you write.

Some are really good ideas

That hard to get is nothing more,
Than something to achieve.

The gifts of possession seem given to those,
unable to see past its worth.

So I keep it between pen and paper and I,
And pray my heart and my mind won't be split.

Perfect.You just make the mistake of hiding them behind a quick and massive flow.

Thanx for your comment!Keep it up!