Comments : Lock Box

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww.. Gabby, this poem is so realistic in a metaphorical way. A lot of people lock their emotions up so no one can see the real them. We don't want to be judged, and we don't want people to worry. I guess there's a lot of reasons why someone would do it.

    I love how you made such a sad poem beautiful. You word choice was very good.

    Another lovely poem. x]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Marie

    Wow, its such an amazing poem
    you have a really good skill at writing poems
    great job though