I love this poem. its very deep. its sad though emotional. keep writing.

Wow this is about a broken heart The imagery takes me right there You have a unique style and i like it

This is another sad but beautiful write ...
deep emotion is beneath each line...

well written.. keep writing..

Hmm, this one reminds me of my first few poems when I first started writing - my style was almost like this.
But I like the way that you can express what you feel so easily and it's hard for the person not to fall within your words and feel the same.

Very sad and heart-strung piece, so much emotion, which is a really good thing, keeps my interest and urges me to read further,

i have tried many times to rid the pain
but the hurt is there and wont leave me be
its comes back no matter what, theres no
gain
i need someone to come and rescue me
(my favorite lines)

good write, keep it up,
john

This was alright. Personally, I would've preferred you capitalized your I's, and used other punctuation such as apostrophes and things. The title, though, "Deppression" is misspelled. It should be spelled "Depression". Honestly, I feel it could use a little work. However, I do like that it comes off as honest, and real. 4/5

-Briana

Wow i can very well relate to this poem. Another short but sweet read^^

Hmm this one is good..my first piece of advise is to use capitilization. It makes it look ten times better and it is way more appealing to the reader. I do like the emotion it gives off.