I'm so tired

by Blueleo   Jul 2, 2008


No motivation lurks inside
Emotions forced aside
Body surrendering to time
Mind fighting for a rhyme

Will burns for one more chance
Thoughts disappear in a slumbered trance
Words emerge and disappear
Sentences fail to adhere

Here's a clever phrase
No better then old cliches
Impossible to make it sincere
No where to put around here

Would hate to let this one go
Just seems to break the flow
Where were these words heading
There goes a perfect setting

Words come out naked of meaning
These sentences need cleaning
What was the anger about
Was this phrase supposed to shout

Body is now completely drained
Mind became completely strained
Eyes slowly begin to dim
Chance of finishing are truly grim

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is effective....
    it could even be in the humor section...
    I begin to think you're a unique rapper...'-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sometimes it goes like that..you just lose you mojo. When it's really bad, it makes you wonder if it really was you, who wrote all the previous stuff, lol.
    Just take a deep breath..it happens to the best and when you learn to let go your inspiration will return to you. Creativity can only survive in a layed back environment;)

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    YOur work is truly amazing. You have a way with words that I just don't have. You can really capture the reader in what you right. You make them feel what you are feeling.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice poem!!..I loved the flow and the rhyme..
    My favorite stanza

    Words come out naked of meaning
    These sentences need cleaning
    What was the anger about
    Was this phrase supposed to shout
    Ur expressions were really great...and the words were carefully chosen..
    Good job,keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Wow, this is my writing process put into a poem. And what a great poem! It has a smooth flow, and is very well writ. Excellent job. Honest Luck

    Sarah

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