----------> Sentiences fail to adhere
`` "Sentiences" should be "Sentences".

Other than that, I thought it was pretty good. It had a nice flow to it, and your word choice was good. I also liked how you used no "I, me, my" etc. It's hard for me to do that.

Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

A poem about the writing process. We have all struggled for days sometimes on one line *bangs head against wall*
Thoughts disappear in slumber(ed) trance
^ This is my favourite line.

Well done

Michael

Wow, this is my writing process put into a poem. And what a great poem! It has a smooth flow, and is very well writ. Excellent job. Honest Luck

Sarah

Nice poem!!..I loved the flow and the rhyme..
My favorite stanza

Words come out naked of meaning
These sentences need cleaning
What was the anger about
Was this phrase supposed to shout
Ur expressions were really great...and the words were carefully chosen..
Good job,keep it up..

YOur work is truly amazing. You have a way with words that I just don't have. You can really capture the reader in what you right. You make them feel what you are feeling.

5/5

Sometimes it goes like that..you just lose you mojo. When it's really bad, it makes you wonder if it really was you, who wrote all the previous stuff, lol.
Just take a deep breath..it happens to the best and when you learn to let go your inspiration will return to you. Creativity can only survive in a layed back environment;)

Take care,

Ingrid

This is effective....
it could even be in the humor section...
I begin to think you're a unique rapper...'-)