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by x Mo x Jul 2, 2008 category : Nature, environment / nature
Angered clouds Black as oiled steel, Slither into the valley, Stealing the sunshine. Lightening flashes Thunder roars Rain patters Wind rushes Runoff dances Down the streets Washing away Summer's impurities.
by Poet on the Piano
I really like this, very well put! "Angered clouds Black as oiled steel," ^Nice simile used there!! "Slither into the valley, Stealing the sunshine." ^Great lines, I love the words you used. Overall, well done, this was really enjoyable to read. Keep writing and take care!