Comments : Everytime you cheat

  • 16 years ago

    by Belle

    "hes forcing me to leave
    And I'm the better half of him"

    I know how this feels. Hang in there and stay strong.

  • 16 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Good job very heartfelt and deepand i loved the rhyme scheme! keep up the good work!

    p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to :-)