Comments : Help Me

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is what i'm terrified of happening to me.....because if it happens to her, i won't have a guide. and that's just....horrifying.

    But there's no one
    I'm still begging the space around me
    Help me
    Free me from myself

    ^^ That second line is my favorite in the entire poem, tara, because it's just so...poetic. rofl. but begging to the space...i could just picture that.

    great job hon...if you ever need anything..

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The poem is great..it is well-written and well-expressed...I enjoyed readin it a lott
    Keep up the good work..