This love poem is out of this world I mean it flows and it rocks the imagery is amazing I was in a since carried away in a free fall |
by Sora
The flow for this poem is amazing and the words took my breath away. it was brillant. |
You wrote this so beautiful, every line was so heartfelt and was feeled with so much emotion. I really enjoyed this part: |
by Bugg
Wow. Really. That's all I can say. I loved, loved the first stanza. Gosh, I wish a guy would write a poem like this for me!! lol I thought the ending was amazing, too. Everything flowed beautifully. It was an exceptional read. |
by Sweet lig
Wow im not actually much interested reading a long poetry but when i read the title i was definitely interested and now i found it that it has a great expressions of feelings inside more this 2 stanzas |
by Tom Swart
Like a ripple moving out from the center of a stone throw your poem has found the shores where it has wakened the words that your chose to display your emotion. very nice. Peace |