Comments : A Love So Deep...

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This love poem is out of this world I mean it flows and it rocks the imagery is amazing I was in a since carried away in a free fall

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    The flow for this poem is amazing and the words took my breath away. it was brillant.
    you expressed yourself so well.

    I compare you to
    The best song in the world
    A melody of a thousand smiles
    The harmony of a beautiful girl

    that stanza was beautiful.
    you did a wonderful job.
    the best poem ive read all day.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    You wrote this so beautiful, every line was so heartfelt and was feeled with so much emotion. I really enjoyed this part:

    "I compare you to
    The best song in the world
    A melody of a thousand smiles
    The harmony of a beautiful girl"

    ^Amazing, you left me speechless!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Wow. Really. That's all I can say. I loved, loved the first stanza. Gosh, I wish a guy would write a poem like this for me!! lol I thought the ending was amazing, too. Everything flowed beautifully. It was an exceptional read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow im not actually much interested reading a long poetry but when i read the title i was definitely interested and now i found it that it has a great expressions of feelings inside more this 2 stanzas

    Exploding like a supernova
    A celestial expression of love
    With a luster brighter than a galaxy of stars
    You illuminate from above

    I scan the sky from my observatory
    To find the source of this light
    But my telescope is inadequate
    My mind won't forget the sight

    it was really amazing and great imagery ilove those thoughts great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Like a ripple moving out from the center of a stone throw your poem has found the shores where it has wakened the words that your chose to display your emotion. very nice. Peace