Comments : Love Hurts

  • 16 years ago

    by sunnah

    I feel u big time but i was never able to express the feelin as well as u did

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I guess this is the fate of many girls not only you, it hurts but you have to overcome.

    i loved the last stanza too much:
    "I shall love no more
    Love killed my heart in the core
    Love will be a feeling I ignore
    Because love hurts
    Forever and for always "

    great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Omg Heba, I never knew... I thought something was wrong. I know this might not be about a guy, because I have lost the will to express my love until I forgot how to express it. You should never give up on Love for it is the strongest feeling which could conquer everything.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow! I really like this one! Its very charming and expressionate! I love it Heba! Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh my God,U feel so much pain inside but U hafta be strong and never give up on ur life and givin urslf a chance to love again...Don't b sad,it's just destiny and I think God has someone perfect for u...
    U r a fantastic person and a good friend...:)
    * Hugs *

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I love how you begin the poem and how you ended it. But wish if you love again. inshallah

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    I really love this poem its wonderful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow !! A very well written and well penned poem. You have done a great job portraying your feelings and the love that you cannot reveal. I believe that love should be the easiest feeling to show for when we truely love someone it is shown in our actions and in our smile. However, I agree with you sometimes it is very hard to admit love to that special person and unfortunately sometimes he is the only person who does not notice you.
    Over all, good work and keep it up !!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awww hun, I didn't know you had all these feelings in you. You will find love oneday, I know it!

    Nice work on your poem, great flow, wonderful use of words... keep it up!