Can't you see ?

by lost4life   Jul 2, 2008


Bet you have no idea that i miss you.
bet you can't guess what i'm thinking of.
bet you don't know how much i love you and that i always will.
bet you have no clue that you're all i think about.
and i bet i'd win this bet, cuz you're just too blind to see anymore..

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    * Verry good ! Great work thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Too much use of same word 'bet'. Doesn't sound that good. It's emotional and seems very personal write. It's good but you can make it better.

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    Very well written i like the way you ended with the "i bet i'd win this bet, cuz you're just too blind to see anymore.."
    it made that a good ending!

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