A perfect Triquatrain This style is very efffective at delivering any feelings or themes

Again, short and the vocabulary basic.Although on a more positive note, the emotion was strong and it was easily followed.

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All I Can Say Is Amazing:) Your A Great Writer.

I picked this poem for the runner up as it had a marvellous and sustained flow, and captured the essence of the title.
The only thing I suggest in this poem is the combined rhyme 'perfection' and 'attention'
and I feel 'not a soul did she tell' would work better than 'not a soul she did tell'.

Despite these two minor points, the rest of it is fantastic and you should be pleased :)

You did a very excellent job with this poem expressing every little feeling you had inside. I was really interested to see what you could come up with here. Because, perfection is just one of those things in life that everyone wishes they had, but they don't have. And not many of us can say we are blessed with perfection. Anyways, this poem was pretty well written I thought. The unique style was what also caught my eye. You did a excellent job explaining how people may look at you and think that you are like full of perfection and everything, but yet.. you aren't. You have your own flaws, and you don't feel perfect and you have that sad feeling inside you and you obviously don't feel the same like others do. Overall, this poem was great. I loved the style, it was a unique choice to choose for such a poem and I enjoyed this piece a lot. It was well written undoubtly. (: 5/5.