Wow, your poem is really breathcatching sasha. i really loved it.
welldone 5\5.

I loved that Sasha.
I can probably read one a day ;)
Luv PMing you.
Really good job.
It related to my life a lot, i really did love it.
Keep it up!
;D

Like i commented the last time you are simply one of the greatest arts i have had the pleasure of seeing their work. so far you have had me reading your work and i am still hooked. the ony problem i think there is with the poem is the word " tare" it is spelled like tear but other then that you have some great ideas and display them brilliantly throught your words
-Raindrops 5/5

Thanks for the comment and I see that I made a spelling error on the word tear, your right it is not supposed to be tare. Thanks Again!

What I have read of your poems they are so EMPOWERING! I love it! (: You really have a platform and talent to reach many peoples lives. There is so much meaning in this piece, so much power and emotion. I really feel your sincere heart in your writing. The flow was a bit rocky, but overall didn't effect the depth of this poem. A few grammatical errors though:

"Your hurting so badly from deep inside."
-Your should be `you're`

"You call out for help but find your alone."
-Again, your should be `you're`

"Its not the first time, you should have known."
-Its should read `it's`

Otherwise, a fabulous piece!
Keep them coming!

Thank you for your nice comment and I will fix my grammar errors right away.

Mashallah ya akhty so beautiful poem,u expressed in a cute way ur feelings...Good job!

Jeez.. another fabulous piece. i loved it, it was heartbreaking, but fantastic. i LOVE your poetry. it is.. so perfect.
keep up the great work :)

This is a very beautiful poem that's filled with mixed emotion. I love the way u expressed it
and love how the poem ends

Your flow was so perfect. I loved the emotion, and you penned it beautifully . what a talent you have