Jim this is the most beautiful I have read. I thought so when you gave me a preview of it before. There isn't much anyone can say but there is love in this poem , of friendship and more. A beautiful thing and something to be cherished forever. Excellent work as always.

Very beautiful when its apart and even more so when it's together i truly cannot say more than has already been said.Its a very beautiful story of love.well written Jim i loved it

Grant

Jim,

The first two verses/ stories are related, but the third does not seem to belong there..or is it just me? I think you painted a beautiful picture for the minds eye and I truly enjoyed reading the stories:)

Thanks for sharing,

Ingrid

This is a beautiful story but my favourite stand-alone part is 'Naturally', wonderful. wonderful poem. My heart was really touched by this. A very special poem. Thank you.