Comments : A place in my heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well frist it is not the wrhyming thing but i think frist fix the title it si mind not mined
    and in the poem too

    second it si a beautifull poem i recomend rhyming , it will make a prefect one too the flow of the emotiona dn the event

    in my opignion i would title it :a place in my heart

  • 16 years ago

    by vintage darling

    I can relate to this poem.
    i use writing as therapy for myself too :)
    good job

    -naivegirl