by Courageous Dreamer Jul 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
-*Written for a Contest.*- |
by Fsams
This one is very cute and romantic. I loved the metaphorical content in ur piece. I really enjoyed it. :-) |
by Blissful
Oh boy can I relate with this. That image just wont get out of your mind and you keep seeing him in everything you do. I liked your flow here because it didnt seem forced and the word usage was also great. I could not see one bad thing. Well done I hope you win! *5/5* |
Don't use a period in the title. :) |
by H E Losey
I enjoyed this read, and see you fixed your typo. |
by The Prince
Thanks for the comments! |