I fell in love

by ReinaPuente   Jul 2, 2008


Leaving you wasn't the best thing to do
but you left me, so i had no choice but to go.
but to try and move on, i look at us now, were good friends and I'm happy!
but it doesn't mean that i don't miss you, cause everyday i miss you more and more each day.
its hard, but I'm okay, love is found, but it's also lost
as days go on, i seem to find myself always near you
you became so close
we had that bond
you know in that friend kinda way
and i love you with all my heart!!
you brought me something i hadn't had in awhile...
happiness
and even though my parents disapproved of us, i didn't let that get in the middle of what we had=)
why?
you would always ask..
and i would always tell you because i loved you more then anything!
and i wasn't gonna let my friends and family get in the middle of us!
i promised you!
in-between everything we have been through i fell in love with you!
your eyes, your smile, your sense of humor and everything you are!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You know the drill. Awesome feelings and emotions expressed so neatly and amazing. So stunning and beautiful. However, things you can improve; Word-Choice, flow, putting your words into stanzas of however many lines you wish, captiolize words such as I, remove your smily face, that is not needed. The reader can infer how the reader is feeling with such emotions like these. (: Overall, a well expressed poem.. just lacks poetic things. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlyFF

    Good work...felt the same once !
    -lot identity...