by ReinaPuente Jul 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Leaving you wasn't the best thing to do |
You know the drill. Awesome feelings and emotions expressed so neatly and amazing. So stunning and beautiful. However, things you can improve; Word-Choice, flow, putting your words into stanzas of however many lines you wish, captiolize words such as I, remove your smily face, that is not needed. The reader can infer how the reader is feeling with such emotions like these. (: Overall, a well expressed poem.. just lacks poetic things. 5/5. |
by FlyFF
Good work...felt the same once ! |