Good work...felt the same once !
-lot identity...

You know the drill. Awesome feelings and emotions expressed so neatly and amazing. So stunning and beautiful. However, things you can improve; Word-Choice, flow, putting your words into stanzas of however many lines you wish, captiolize words such as I, remove your smily face, that is not needed. The reader can infer how the reader is feeling with such emotions like these. (: Overall, a well expressed poem.. just lacks poetic things. 5/5.