Now that was a very very good write .... I loved the way you started, and ended it amazing poem

Hi! In fact, it's so sweet poem, i like it very much :)
5/5

This was a great piece. very emotional. there was alot of different emotions mixed all in it, and that's a great thing, very creative.

Life seemed impossible t o you... When all of us had hope
Now... hope has passed us by...
Like a desert... drinking the rain... But still dry.

i liked those lines the most. great job at comparing the things together. this was a n excellent piece indeed. keep writing! job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.