The war.... i hate revenge

by ReinaPuente   Jul 2, 2008


Life is an endless war!!
hearts ache each day and night
dreams are crushed with thoughts of horror
life goes on...we tend to not notice the ones who cry for help each day that passes
crimes are committed
people die, then they become a part of the past
we are in war with our own blood....
with someone made of love and has a family to go back home and Cherish!!!!
does that mean anything to anybody!!
is dieing worth it
your family!!
your friends!!!
i hate war
i hate revenge!!!!
let me ask the women and men at war is it worth never seeing your husband back at home...or worth seeing your baby girl or son and wife!!!!!!!
huh??????
its not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so stop!!!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    I like this poem....but i think that you should put in more stanzas and less exclamation points....lol but still..you put your creativity into it so therefore...its great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow. Was this ever intense! It was wonderfully worded. You expressed your emotions sooo very well. I felt like you were screaming, which is really good! Those things you want to get off your chest.. :) You mispelled some stuff, but overall it was a really good poem that you expressed your feelings about war and life and different things. Well done. 4/5.

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