Please Don't Show Whats Inside

by SashaMirage   Jul 3, 2008


Please sorrowful tears return to my eyes,
Don't let me fall apart as we say our goodbyes.
Allowing him to see what I'm feeling inside,
Oh, tears stop now; you have to hide.

Please cheerful smile remain on my lips
Hide the sound of your bleeding heart as it rips.
Let him believe you are much stronger than this,
Oh, don't let him know, how you need his kiss.

Please ivory hand try to remain still.
Be very calm; the art of patience is skill.
Don't start shaking as he breaks your heart.
Show him it means nothing if we part.

Please courageous legs don't become weak.
Falling to the floor when he starts to speak.
Show him that you can walk very strong.
Don't let him know for his love you long.

Please breath you must now remain steady.
Prepare for this last battle; you're ready.
Please racing heart, stop beating so fast!
Hold on to this moment make it last.

Please tears, return to my misty eyes.
He's watching you now as we say our goodbyes.
Lips, you are frowning, I told you to smile!
Hands, couldn't you remain calm for awhile?

Legs, you are shaking; soon you will fall.
Breath you didn't remain steady at all!
Oh, poor heart, you are beating so fast.
Hold on to this moment, for it's your last.

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  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Whoa. A very strong poem. I read it and I thought of my last break up. How this is exactly what went through my head. How it didnt even come true. I love the idea behind this and the pain you infused into each word. The imagery was amazing and the rhyming, flawless. Amazing job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Whoa. A very strong poem. I read it and I thought of my last break up. How this is exactly what went through my head. How it didnt even come true. I love the idea behind this and the pain you infused into each word. The imagery was amazing and the rhyming, flawless. Amazing job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow.. wow. this was... wow. i loved it. it was so sad, but it was a fantastic poem. so many people could relate to this poem, but you wrote it in a very original way. i loved the repetition and rhyme, it added to the flow of the poem. this has got to be one of my favourite sad poems.. it was magnificent. i cant get over it, the way you worded each and every line was perfect.
    you should be extremely proud of this poem.. it is fantastic. it really made me think about my own past experiences. Fabulous..

    5/5 for sure.. actually, 10000/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveTear

    I love it ! 5/5 u left me without words ....

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    A very touching poem, I can really feel you, but come on never hide your emotions sasha try to be frank.
    may allah be with you.

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