A very touching poem, I can really feel you, but come on never hide your emotions sasha try to be frank.
may allah be with you.

I love it ! 5/5 u left me without words ....

Wow.. wow. this was... wow. i loved it. it was so sad, but it was a fantastic poem. so many people could relate to this poem, but you wrote it in a very original way. i loved the repetition and rhyme, it added to the flow of the poem. this has got to be one of my favourite sad poems.. it was magnificent. i cant get over it, the way you worded each and every line was perfect.
you should be extremely proud of this poem.. it is fantastic. it really made me think about my own past experiences. Fabulous..

5/5 for sure.. actually, 10000/5.

Whoa. A very strong poem. I read it and I thought of my last break up. How this is exactly what went through my head. How it didnt even come true. I love the idea behind this and the pain you infused into each word. The imagery was amazing and the rhyming, flawless. Amazing job. 5/5

Whoa. A very strong poem. I read it and I thought of my last break up. How this is exactly what went through my head. How it didnt even come true. I love the idea behind this and the pain you infused into each word. The imagery was amazing and the rhyming, flawless. Amazing job. 5/5