Here I am again

by Rachelle   Jul 3, 2008


Here I am in
that same position
I was back then
my heart is broke
and needs 2 mend
this happened again
I thought u were the 1
we had so much fun
here I am with my
heart that needs 2 mend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    Deep good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    I like this poem, it's good. you could have added more to it to make it more emotional, but still really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful dreamer

    Very good. i think you could add a little more..4/5. but awesome.

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Good poem. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    I really like this is poem its very gd minor a few spelling errors but ihter than that i really like it.

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