Comments : Overwhelmed

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    What a wonderful write!!...It was so deep and so dark..
    My favorite words were

    I have no pure body of my own
    No true vessel for my scathing soul
    I live to serve the bestial side of me

    I loved them bcoz U could express that u r dead inside but just breathing for nothing..
    Great job,keep it up...

  • 16 years ago

    by adriaan

    I love this poem! It's been a long time since I've seen anything of this quality. 5/5 :)